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Student short horror/thriller - feedback welcome
Posted: 17 June 2011 01:55 PM   [ Ignore ]
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Hey,

I was just wondering whether people could have a look at a film I made at university this year. I know it’s not perfect, but as this was the first film I’ve made, I was wondering whether anyone could have a look at it, and tell me what was good/bad as a reflection on how to improve in any future projects I direct.

The link to the film is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sfqBk9jTK-U and I’d really appreciate any feedback, whether you liked or hated it!

Thanks

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Posted: 02 July 2011 10:23 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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Taking the pic of the roadkill was awesume the editing cut.  However without music the opening drags.  The biggest fault I see is the acting.  The actors are disconnected and inhibited thus, unentertaining.  Check out mine.  Its not finished and has some flaws but might give u an idea about pacing.  And if you like it please post on facebook

http://www.indiegogo.com/Serial-Kill-Her

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Posted: 03 December 2011 05:18 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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