No tripod?! Every film maker needs a tri-pod! I thought you went too wide too often also. Try tightening up the frame. Camera was pretty shaky as well…Using a real baseball bat and crummy sun chair is probably pretty dangerous also…I didn’t read the hunger games…but, I imagine this has little to do with it. It kinda seems like some cutesy idea you used to make a girl you like a star and tacked on the title Hunger Games to add hits..lol! It’s a grand technique I use ALL THE TIME! HAHA! I kid. Try adding some dialogue next time! The parody would have been more successful if you used a famous line, or said, I’m hungry or smth…good luck! Keep on making films and remember…Hunger Games is just a Battle Royal RIP OFF!
Godspeed,
ZSPS