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Hunger Games Short Film
Posted: 12 May 2012 09:01 AM   [ Ignore ]
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Here’s a short film I made with my friends. I think it’s pretty well filmed, but it is the first short I’ve ever made, so please give me critiques. I need to learn how to make better stuff. Thanks for checking it out.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naHL2hkaIlM

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Posted: 12 May 2012 09:02 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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it’s less than 2 minutes so please check it out.

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Posted: 28 June 2012 08:33 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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Hey everyone…thanks! about to hit 500 views

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Posted: 29 June 2012 02:27 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]
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this was so bad :(

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Posted: 30 June 2012 02:40 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]
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No tripod?! Every film maker needs a tri-pod! I thought you went too wide too often also. Try tightening up the frame. Camera was pretty shaky as well…Using a real baseball bat and crummy sun chair is probably pretty dangerous also…I didn’t read the hunger games…but, I imagine this has little to do with it. It kinda seems like some cutesy idea you used to make a girl you like a star and tacked on the title Hunger Games to add hits..lol! It’s a grand technique I use ALL THE TIME! HAHA! I kid. Try adding some dialogue next time! The parody would have been more successful if you used a famous line, or said, I’m hungry or smth…good luck! Keep on making films and remember…Hunger Games is just a Battle Royal RIP OFF!

Godspeed,
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